It is so nice to be here
Just here..
With no wonder on 'where' and 'what'...
It is so nice to be here
Right here..
With no walk on 'period' and 'past'...
It is so nice to be here
Just here..
With no thought on 'future' and 'perfect'
It is so nice to be here
Right here..
With no doubt on 'when' and 'how'
It is so nice to be here
Right here.
Just here..in the present...forever...
6 comments:
“Present” - an eternally fleeting, yet renewing refresh. Would no promise of future, no regrets of past still make present a real “Present”. May be Maybe not.
Hi..
Looks like its written in 'Mark Strand' style... here is my favorite from Mark Strand..
"Keeping Things Whole"
In a field
I am the absence
of field.
This is
always the case.
Wherever I am
I am what is missing.
When I walk
I part the air
and always
the air moves in
to fill the spaces
where my body's been.
We all have reasons
for moving.
I move
to keep things whole.
-- Mark Strand
Keep it your thoughts flowing...
Regards,
Vasu
absolutely fantastic thoughts .. knitted exquisitely like a perfect sweater, which gives the required warmth and the style needed for the occasion. The very idea of being in the state of present that too for ever is a unique blend of an imagination and a dream, and the way that was expressed in this poem is nothing less than marvelous. I would only shout to the world, to make way for the next John Keats, the female version.
:)) - nenu kooda english nerchukuntunna.. haha.. ;)) !!
absolutely fantastic thoughts .. knitted exquisitely like a perfect sweater, which gives the required warmth and the style needed for the occasion. The very idea of being in the state of present that too for ever is a unique blend of an imagination and a dream, and the way that was expressed in this poem is nothing less than marvelous. I would only shout to the world, to make way for the next John Keats, the female version.
:)) - nenu kooda english nerchukuntunna.. haha.. ;)) !!
Wow.. I assure you.. you re really confusing me. :) Dont ask me more..
Cheers,
You Know who
"Present" well written jots.. well, every moment "is so nice!" in the present without periods and pasts. It has got a lot of inner meaning.. and yes ended perfectly, live in the present forever.. bygones be bygones..
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